Esn's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Edge Of Darkness]

She shouldn't have opened her eyes

That would have been more effective. He's joining her in DEATH not in LIFE! It makes no sense for her to open her eyes at the end.

Other than that, brilliant work.

[WT, then some (Clay)]

GOOD...

I really liked the moving camera and the facial details! But make them have longer legs... it's hard to make an interesting fight with short legs.

[Castle II]

I agree with Hoobidaw

It was VERY good, but ditch the stick figures for the next one if you think you have the drawing ability to do it. There are already too many stick figure cartoons... I'd like to see YOUR style.

[Bush Kerry Debate]

Wow, great art!

You should use your artistic talents for something other than political flashes... not that it was bad, but I think an original idea from you would be better.

0 for interactivity b/c there was no play button...

[Walk-Smash-Walk]

Not bad!

However, "too repetitive" is an ongoing problem throughout the film, not just at the beginning. It would have been better if you had made more things happen to the little robot... I really think you should put more situations into it, more crazy stuff. As it was, you had "it" for a while just after the beginning, but then it began to get repetitive again.

I'm adding you to "favourite artists" now... this and Dad's Home are great!

[Dad's Home]

Aaaaah....

STYLISH! I loved how he put the fire out by putting the cat on his head. Lots of unexpected, fast-paced humour.

You're on to something good here, make more like this!

[Chuckles]

Whoa... scary

I actually like how everything is bigger than it should be; it gives it a unique style.

I think you could do better, though. Keep your individual style, but work more on finetuning things... every little small detail makes it better.

[The Takamori Legend]

I agree with Flashhound

This movie is technically pretty well done, but better story would improve it.

A thing about the animation, though; sometimes, the body proportions didn't seem quite right. Like when the ninja is lying on the ground for example, and in manyu other cases; something just seems wrong.

[(2004)Kolors OfKlayCity2]

Better than part 1

Ok, THAT was pretty funny. You ALMOST got the whole humour thing perfect; however, at the end when the 2 have the conversation I stopped laughing because the pace just seemed to die.

[(2004) Kolors of KlayCity]

Not bad...

this one was better than your previous front-page submission.