Portrait of a serial killer?
When I look at this followed by Roof Tiling, a lot more things DO seem to make sense... was it your plan all along to have a prequel?
You basically reused most of the graphics from Roof Tiliing, but it's still quite good. I think the drawings should be a little more polished, actually - I like your style but I do think you should work on refining it & learning to draw a realistic view of your characters from any angle.
However, the voices, sound, story and editing are simply class. An excellent insight into the mind of a possible future wife-killer. Although it does make me a little scared that you should understand their minds so well... oh yeah, and the talking crow was quite funny.
One thing about the subliminal flashes that you use: I think they should sometimes be on the screen a LITTLE longer... it's not fun if they flash by so fast that the viewer gets no idea at all of what's on them. If it's a really simple shape or word then fast is ok, but if it's something more comlicated a little longer would be better.